Letter

Band 5+: You and your family are planning a weekend getaway to a nearby town. Write a letter to a local hotel to make a reservation. You should include details about: - The dates of your stay and the number of people in your family - The type of room you require and any specific requests (e.g., a cot for a baby) - Inquire about the hotel's amenities, such as a swimming pool or restaurant

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am planning a weekend vacation with my family and I am in the process of making booking arrangements. We need accommodation for four people for the upcoming week: my father, mother, brother, and myself.

We require four rooms, including two bedrooms, a kitchen, and a bathroom. Additionally, it would be wonderful to have a garden where we can take walks and enjoy some fresh air. It would also be great if the kitchen is well-decorated.

Do you have any discounts or packages?

Thank you for considering my request.

Yours sincerely,

Alice Brown

Word Count: 97

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the requirements of the task, including the dates (implicitly), number of people, room types, and inquiries about discounts. However, there are some minor omissions, such as not specifying the exact dates and being somewhat vague about the room requirements. To improve, provide specific dates and clarify the desired room configuration (e.g., a two-bedroom suite rather than four separate rooms). The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The request for 'four rooms, including two bedrooms, a kitchen, and a bathroom' is confusing and lacks clarity. Consider rephrasing to clearly state your accommodation needs. For example, specify if you need a suite with two bedrooms, a kitchen, and a bathroom, or if you are looking for multiple rooms with these features. Also, the letter could benefit from a clearer introduction stating the purpose of the letter more directly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task. However, using more specific and descriptive language could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'well-decorated,' you could use terms like 'fully-equipped' or 'modern appliances' to describe the kitchen. Varying your vocabulary can make the letter more engaging and informative.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some areas where improvements can be made. The sentence structure is simple and could be varied for better flow. Pay attention to clarity and precision in your requests to avoid ambiguity. Ensure that your sentences are clear and concise to effectively convey your message.

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