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Band 5+: You recently attended a two-day training course, but the course was poorly organised and the materials were outdated. Write a letter to the course organiser. In your letter: explain why you attended the course describe what you were dissatisfied with suggest how the course can be improved

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Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing to explain my dissatisfaction experience of a professional training course organized by a local company.

That course contains repairing the damage machinery. Although, I had high expectation relevant to that course but unfortunately, I am failed to understand it. First of all, the trainer appeared unprepared and often failed to teach the essential instruction clearly. As a result, several participants dissatisfied with the quality of instructions.

Furthermore, the venue was not suitable for professional training. The hall was over crowded, poorly ventilated and lacked proper audiovisual equipment. The seats was uncomfortable and difficult to concentrate during sessions.

I believe that these issues significantly reduces the value of course. Furthermore, I would appreciate you to refund me or arrange further course free of charge and i hope you will take crucial steps to make your training course more beneficial for us.

I look forward you to hearing your response

Yours, Faithfully

Farah

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

training: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three bullet points required by the task. You provided details about the course topic, explained the issues with the instructor and the venue, and suggested ways to compensate for the dissatisfaction. However, the response is somewhat limited in depth. To improve, ensure that all points are developed more fully; for example, instead of just saying the trainer was unprepared, you could briefly mention a specific instance of what went wrong. Additionally, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure (e.g., 'I am failed to understand it' or 'The seats was uncomfortable'), as these errors can occasionally obscure the clarity of your points. Improving the flow and precision of your vocabulary will help in meeting the requirements more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter follows a logical structure, addressing all three bullet points from the prompt. However, the flow is somewhat disrupted by awkward phrasing and incorrect transitions. For example, starting a sentence with 'Although' in the manner used is grammatically incorrect and breaks the logical connection. To improve, use more natural cohesive devices such as 'Regarding the course content...' or 'In addition to the poor instruction...' to link your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

You have used some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'poorly ventilated,' 'audiovisual equipment,' and 'significantly reduces.' However, there are several instances of incorrect word choices and collocations, such as 'dissatisfaction experience' instead of 'dissatisfaction with' and 'repairing the damage machinery' instead of 'damaged machinery.' Aim to learn common word pairings (collocations) to make your writing sound more natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The seats was' instead of 'The seats were'), tense usage (e.g., 'I am failed' instead of 'I failed'), and sentence structure. Additionally, punctuation and capitalization errors (e.g., 'i hope') need attention. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures and ensuring that your verbs agree with your subjects in both number and tense.

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