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Band 6+: The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart showing percentages for Watching and Participating in various sports. The data is as follows: Football (Watching: 45%, Participating: 10%), Rugby (Watching: 30%, Participating: 20%), Basketball (Watching: 38%, Participating: 25%), Badminton (Watching: 29%, Participating: 25%), Fishing (Watching: 15%, Participating: 50%), and Horse riding and racing (Watching: 45%, Participating: 18%).

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The graph illustrate the proportion of males aged 16-25 in a country who fond of watching sports and engaging sports.

Overall, it is apparent that males’ participation rates recorded consistently lower than of watching, except for fishing. Notably, The majority of males aged 16-25 preferred watching football and horse riding and racing, while the highest participation rates was observed in fishing.

Looking first at watching, Football and Horse riding and racing were the most popular sports for men, with a comparable figures (45%) being recorded in both sports, and to a lesser extent, followed by basketball, accounted approximately 37% of men. Rugby and Badminton shared a comparable figures, with 30% of men from the former and 29% for the latter. In contrast, fishing was the least favorite sports to watch among others, comprising a mere 15% of men.

Regarding males’ participation rates, fishing was the most popular physical activities for men aged 16-25 to take part in, which accounted for 50%. This is followed by basketball and badminton, the figures for both sports was equal of 25%. Meanwhile, all the remaining sprots were much lower, ranging from10% to 20%.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 5

watching: 4

16-25: 3

participation: 3

rates: 3

fishing: 3

figures: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between watching and participating in sports. The overview is clear and highlights the key exception (fishing). The data is reported accurately according to the visual description, and the structure is logical. To improve, ensure better grammatical precision, particularly regarding subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the figures... was' should be 'were') and the use of articles/prepositions. Additionally, minor typos like 'sprots' should be avoided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs divided by the two categories (watching vs. participating). However, the flow is occasionally interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical slips. To improve, ensure that transitions between sentences are smoother and that the relationship between ideas is expressed through more sophisticated cohesive devices rather than just simple additive structures.

Lexical Resource

You have attempted to use a variety of vocabulary to describe proportions and trends (e.g., 'comprising a mere', 'accounted for', 'comparable figures'). However, there are several instances of word choice errors and awkward collocations, such as 'who fond of' (missing 'are') and 'the most popular physical activities' (subject-verb agreement/plurality issues). Aim for more precision in your word choices and ensure that adjectives and nouns are used in their correct forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that impact the overall quality. These include subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'The graph illustrate', 'the figures... was'), missing prepositions (e.g., 'engaging sports' should be 'engaging in sports'), and errors in article usage. While you use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, the frequency of errors in basic grammar prevents a higher score. Focus on mastering subject-verb agreement and the correct use of relative clauses to improve accuracy.

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