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Band 6+: Some people think children should not use smartphones until they are at least 16 years old. Do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, in this contemporary epoch, myriad children use smartphones for their studies, gaining better education and even growing their presence on social media. However, some folks believe using smartphones before the age of 16 creates a menace and distracts children from their goals. I partially agree with this notion. This essay intends to analyze both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To begin with, there are numerous benefits to consider. Fundamentally, there are a few boons of using smartphones before 16. Children get more exposure to online platforms, and they can also connect with good teachers and individuals who provide useful educational tips and tactics. Moreover, tutors nowadays posting online lessons on online platforms and developers creating educational apps via purchase to develop literacy.

Conversely, there are several disadavantages of using phone before 16. A further reason is that children are more vulnerable to the risks of the online world than adults. Since they often cannot judge whether content is safe, they may be exposed to violent or inappropriate material, or even contacted by strangers through social media. Without parental supervision, this can affect a child’s mental development.

To conclude, I partly agree that children should not use them freely until a certain age because their negative effects on health, concentration, and social life are far more significant in my opinion.

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