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Band 6+: ✅ You applied for a job at a company but haven't received a response yet. Write a letter to the HR department to inquire about the status of your application. • Mention the position you applied for and the date of application. • Explain that you are eager to know the status of your application. • Request an update and express your continued interest in the role.

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Dear Mrs.

Juanna, I hope this letter finds you and your family in great health. The purpose of this letter is to write to you to express my protest about the status of my application.

First of all, I would like to inform you that I am delighted that you are hiring me. One month ago, I went to your company, and at that moment, you opened hiring for manager. Then, I decided to apply for this job because I was unemployed, and afterward, I completed my application on the 29th of October.

It would be great if you could provide further information in detail about the application; that is, what you want to hire a person to suit the role of manager. So, I have still waited for a response, and I am interested in your answer.

Along with that, I have enough experience as a manager; I was head of group and recreational events for the university. Besides that, I ask you to review my application again, and I will not stop until you hire me at your company.

Kind regards,

Selena Gomez

Word Count: 185

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task but could be improved by directly stating the inquiry and maintaining a more professional tone throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure and flow could be improved for better clarity and coherence. Some parts feel disjointed.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks the range and precision expected at a higher band. More formal and precise language would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7.5

Grammar is mostly accurate, showing good control. More sophisticated grammatical structures could be incorporated to achieve a higher score.

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