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Band 6+: You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself. explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Nabin,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing this letter to express my interest in part-time job opportunities. I got to know about your agency through my friends and I am hoping for proper guidance for me to land a job. As I am in immense need of work.

Currently, I am an international student pursuing computer system technician at Fanshawe college. Being a student from overseas I am facing problems covering my expenses. Since the housing prices are going up day by day, I could not even afford to pay my rent. I am available for any kind of job that would be flexible to my college schedule. Additionally, jobs that require computer skills like word, excel and PowerPoint would be a perfect match for me as I already have an experience of 1 to 3 years working with those application.

You may contact me on 5197024249.I will be looking forward hearing from you and getting your help.

Sincerely,

Gaurav Subedi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant details about the job seeker's background, desired job type, and skills. Consider strengthening the connection between your skills and the specific job you're seeking.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some inconsistencies in tone and a few points where the flow could be improved. Pay closer attention to the overall structure and ensure a smooth transition between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task. While there are some instances of informal language, the word choice is adequate for conveying the necessary information. Strive for more formal and precise language to enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates some grammatical range, there are noticeable errors that affect clarity and overall fluency. A thorough review and correction of grammatical errors would significantly improve the quality of the letter.

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