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Band 8+: Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful alduts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views on whether children should be taught to be competitive or cooperative. While the desire for competition can sometimes be beneficial in life, I believe that the ability to cooperate is more important.

On one hand, competition can be a strong source of motivation for children. When teachers incorporate games or prizes to introduce an element of competition into their lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to outshine their classmates. This type of healthy rivalry may help build children’s self-confidence and motivate them to work independently, ultimately allowing them to progress more quickly. When these children leave school, their confidence and determination will serve them well in competitive situations, such as job interviews. Therefore, it could be argued that fostering competition is essential in preparing children for adult life.

On the other hand, it is arguably more crucial to prepare children for the numerous aspects of life that require cooperation. In the workplace, adults are generally expected to work in teams, follow the instructions of supervisors, and support more junior staff members. Skills in team collaboration are much more beneficial than a competitive drive to win. This is the mindset that I believe schools should nurture in young individuals. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers, teachers should demonstrate to children that they achieve more when they work together.

In conclusion, I understand the reasoning behind encouraging competitiveness in children; however, it seems to me that fostering a cooperative attitude is far more valuable in adult life.

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