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Band 8+: Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful alduts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today’s conflicting environment, it is crucial to identify common ground for cooperation or to address the aggressive nature of competition. While some argue that a healthy sense of competition can be beneficial for children as they grow into adulthood, others prioritize collaboration. Considering all perspectives, I firmly believe that cooperation is more beneficial than competition.

On one hand, parents can support their children’s ability to navigate future challenges by fostering a desire to win. If all competitions were eliminated from schools, we might lose the healthy ambition that is essential in various areas of life. Moreover, competition can inspire young people to strive for excellence, drawing on past patterns of success to instigate positive changes in the world without confrontation. Just as competition can yield significant outcomes, so too can the pursuit of effective solutions or the creation of captivating fiction be achieved through cooperative efforts rather than rivalry.

On the other hand, collaboration may not yield positive results without a certain level of challenge among participants in a project. While teamwork is undoubtedly the best approach to execute complex projects, children need motivation to utilize their skills and push beyond their limits. Unfortunately, competition might be the only means to encourage them to step out of their comfort zones. Nevertheless, cooperation has the potential to surpass the benefits that competition offers in this context.

In conclusion, given the aggressive nature of modern competition and the necessity to enhance cooperation, I believe that collaboration is more vital for young people. While I acknowledge that a degree of competition can be useful in adult life, it is important to maintain a balance between the two.

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