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Band 6+: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear team,

I hope you finds this message well. As we prepare an annual party every year, I want something divergent in the party this time and writing this letter to convey the message for re-arrangement of the party.

As you know, last year the party was awesome but I think changing the theme will make it more enjoyable as the theme was really boring last time. On the other hand, the venue also needs to be different than the past one as we’re using the same place since last two years.

Last year, the food was not much delicious as there were numerous negative feedbacks from our colleagues on the food that we got while conducting the survey at the end of the party.

Lastly, I think we should meet in a Sip and Spill cafe which is near the office to plan further for the party and afternoon time will suit best to all of us, so I advise you to be there by 3 pm.

Hope to see you soon.

Yours lovingly

Dilu

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions for improvement are clear.

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The letter's message is mostly clear, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability.

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4.5

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