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Band 5+: The bar graph below shows the average monthly rainfall (in millimeters) for three cities: London, Tokyo, and Sydney, over a period of one year. Summariza the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph illustrating average monthly rainfall in millimeters: In January, London records approximately 80mm, Tokyo 50mm, Sydney slightly above 100mm; February shows London at 60mm, Tokyo just over 50mm, Sydney close to 120mm; March shows London around 60mm, Tokyo about 100mm, Sydney slightly over 130mm; April has London at roughly 50mm, Tokyo 150mm, Sydney over 100mm; May has London near 50mm, Tokyo slightly over 140mm, Sydney around 100mm; June shows London at approximately 50mm, Tokyo close to 200mm, Sydney at 130mm; July has London at 60mm, Tokyo slightly above 150mm, Sydney reaches around 90mm; August reads London slightly over 60mm, Tokyo above 150mm, Sydney approximately 70mm; September lists London at 50mm, Tokyo about 180mm, Sydney close to 55mm; October reveals London at 70mm, Tokyo approximately 160mm, Sydney slightly over 90mm; November shows London at 80mm, Tokyo 100mm, Sydney about 110mm; December displays London slightly above 70mm, Tokyo nearly 50mm, Sydney just over 75mm.

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The bar chart provides information about the average monthly rainfall on a year in millimeters for three cities: London,Tokyo and Sidney.

Overall, it is clear that, on average, the months from March to September are those with the most significant values, in particular about the cities of Sidney and Tokyo. In general, London is not a very rainy city compared to the others. Furthermore, about the months of January, February, October, November and December are not see important data.

In detail, about the highest average rainfall, for the months from March to June, Sidney presents similar values of monthly rainfall with 150 mm on a year, on average. Similar trend is reported by Tokyo with lower values, from May to September, even if the data are more fluctuating.

Furthermore, from January to March, November and december , the data for the three cities are almost the same with some fluctuations. In October the peak is reached by Tokyo over the other.

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average: 4

rainfall: 3

months: 3

march: 3

values: 3

tokyo: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some overall trends but lacks specific data to support the observations. There are also some inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, include more specific data points and ensure accuracy in reporting the values from the graph. Also, the writing could be more organized and coherent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For instance, the connections between the overall trends and the detailed data could be made more explicit. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit vague ('important data,' 'almost the same'). Try to use more specific language to describe the rainfall amounts and trends. For example, instead of 'important data,' you could say 'higher rainfall levels' or 'significant rainfall amounts.' Also, consider using a wider range of synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'Sidney presents similar values of monthly rainfall with 150 mm on a year' contains errors. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct grammar usage to enhance the accuracy of your writing. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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Band 5+: The bar graph below shows the average monthly rainfall (in millimeters) for three cities: London, Tokyo, and Sydney, over a period of one year. Summariza the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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