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Band 6+: The chart below shows the frequency of exercise by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

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The image shows the frequency of exercise by age group with percentages as follows: daily 18-40 is approximately 10%, 41-60 is approximately 7%, 60 plus is approximately 5%; multiple times per week 18-40 is approximately 40%, 41-60 is approximately 35%, 60 plus is approximately 20%; weekly 18-40 is approximately 30%, 41-60 is approximately 25%, 60 plus is approximately 40%; once or twice a month 18-40 is approximately 12%, 41-60 is approximately 20%, 60 plus is approximately 20%; a few times a year 18-40 is approximately 5%, 41-60 is approximately 8%, 60 plus is approximately 10%; never 18-40 is approximately 3%, 41-60 is approximately 8%, 60 plus is approximately 10%.

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The given bar graph illustrates the data about frequency of exercise among different age groups.

Overall, a clear pattern emerges from the data. It can be seen that people aged 18-40 maintained a leading position in most categories, being followed by 60 plus individuals.

Now, turning to the details, people aged 18-40 ranked first in terms of daily exercises, multiple times per week, and once or twice a month, accounting approximately for 10%, 40% and 15%. As for individuals aged 60 plus, they outranked all others in weekly, and a few times a year sections, reaching approximately 40% and 15%.

Meanwhile, people aged 41-60 showed average results across all exercise types. This age group accounted for 35% at multiple times per week, and 25% at weekly exercises. The only exception for this segment was the “never” category. People aged 41-60 maintained a leading position in this sector, at almost 15%.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between the age groups. The overview is clear, and the data is organized logically. To improve, ensure that the data reported is as accurate as possible according to the visual description (for example, the 'never' category for the 41-60 group was described as 8% in the prompt, but reported as 15% in the text). Additionally, while the comparisons are good, more sophisticated grouping of data could help enhance the flow of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Now, turning to the details', and 'Meanwhile' helps guide the reader. However, the transition between the overview and the details could be smoother. To improve, ensure that the overview accurately reflects the most significant trends (for example, the general decline in frequency as age increases) rather than just stating who 'led' in most categories.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and used to convey meaning effectively, with terms like 'illustrates', 'emerges', 'outranked', and 'segment'. There is some good variety in how age groups and categories are described. To reach a higher band, try to use more sophisticated synonyms for 'people' (e.g., 'participants', 'respondents', 'demographics') and more precise collocations when describing data trends.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that hinder the flow. For instance, 'accounting approximately for' should be 'accounting for approximately', and 'at multiple times per week' would be more naturally phrased as 'for the 'multiple times per week' category'. Pay close attention to preposition usage and word order to ensure the writing sounds more natural and professional.

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