Bar Chart

Band 7+: The chart below shows the percentage of internet users by age group in Canada who shopped online in 2014 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The chart below shows the percentage of internet users by age group in Canada who shopped online in 2014 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a bar graph comparing the percentage of Canadian internet users across six age groups who shopped online in 2014 and 2018. In 2014, 15-25 had 25%, 26-35 had 35%, 35-45 had 30%, 45-55 had 20%, 55-65 had just under 15%, and 65+ had just over 5%. In 2018, 15-25 had 35%, 26-35 had just under 40%, 35-45 had just under 35%, 45-55 had 25%, 55-65 had just over 15%, and 65+ had just over 10%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The chart shows the percentage of people in Canada from different age groups who shopped online in 2014 and 2018.

Overall, online shopping increased in all age groups from 2014 to 2018. Also, people in the middle age groups shopped online more than younger and older people.

In 2014, people who were around ages 26-35 had the highest rate of online shopping, at over . However, by 2018, the 35-45 age group became the leading group, reaching nearly which is the highest amount on the chart. Similarly, the 26-35 group also increased to around . The 45-55 group followed a similar trend, growing from approximately to about

For the younger group 15-25, online shopping increased from in 2014 to about in 2018. The elderly age groups had lower percentages overall. The 55-65 group rose from about to , while the 65+ group had the lowest rates, increasing from %6 to just over .

In conclusion, online shopping became more popular in all age groups, but middle-aged people used it the most.

Word Count: 171

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

group: 7

online: 6

groups: 5

people: 4

shopping: 4

increased: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the information, highlighting key trends and making relevant comparisons. The data is presented accurately, and the overall structure is clear and logical. The writing demonstrates a strong command of language and fulfills all requirements of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, body paragraphs discussing specific age groups, and a conclusion. The overall trend of increased online shopping is clearly stated in the overview. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, instead of repeatedly starting sentences with 'The [age group] group,' try using synonyms or rephrasing to add variety and flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses appropriate vocabulary related to the topic of online shopping and age demographics. There is room to enhance the lexical resource by incorporating more precise language to describe the data. For instance, instead of saying 'around ages 26-35,' you could say 'the 26-35 age group.' Also, consider using a wider range of synonyms for words like 'increased' and 'percentage' to demonstrate a greater command of vocabulary. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. There are a few instances where the phrasing could be improved for clarity and conciseness. For example, in the sentence 'In 2014, people who were around ages 26-35 had the highest rate of online shopping, at over,' consider rephrasing to 'In 2014, the 26-35 age group had the highest rate of online shopping, at over 35%.' Pay attention to minor errors and aim for more precise and polished sentence construction throughout the report.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of education setting in the uk in 2010

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female teachers in six variations types of learning setting in the United Kingdom in 2010. The chart was diffrents six types of educational: Nursery, Primary school, Secoundary school, Collage, Private training institude and University. Their are first there types of learning high teachers in women and […]

Band 4+

The chart below shows the internet users (in millions) in different countries in the Middle East as of June 2017.

The graph illustrates the internet users(in millions) in several countries in the Middle East as of June 2017 Overall, all of these countries( Iran, Saudi Arabia, Iraq, UAE,Yemen, Israel, Jordan,Syria,Lebonon) were using internet not enough for their population. This mean these countries’ internet users constitute approximetly 30 or 40 percent of their population in 2017. […]

Band 4+

The chart below gives information about active video games players by country in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts shows proportions about of the number of active video games players by country in the year 2012. Overall, US players were the bigger part, and the gap between their percentage and the other countries players percentages was very wide. In the year 2012 the percentage of active players in US was 85 percent, […]

Band 5+

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart illustrate the way of buying music by people during 2011 to 2018 Looking from an overall perspective,it is readily apparent that more sizeable increase was buying music by CDs purchased,which dicreased dramatically by the end of period.While,the proportion of buying music by stream takes the lowest result in the period grew greathly […]

Band 4+

The chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the three different methods of waste disposal in a European nation between 2005 and 2008, measured in million tonnes. Overall, most methods experienced a significant downward trajectory, albeit to varying degrees, except for burning, with burning exhibiting the most widespread way by the end of the timeframe. Conversely, landfill and dumping […]

Band 7+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium