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Band 6+: The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a progression of land use over three time periods: 1960, 1980, and 2000; in 1960, a Shopping Centre and Farmland are adjacent to a Hospital which is above a Car Park; in 1980, a Cancer Centre replaces the Shopping Centre and a Pharmacy is added next to the Hospital, with a Nursing School replacing Farmland, all maintaining the Car Park's position; by 2000, the Pharmacy has expanded in size, overshadowing the diminished Cancer Centre, with the Nursing School also larger and the Car Park unchanged.

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The provided maps illustrate the changes that have occurred near the Queen Mary Hospital since the year it was constructed.

Overall, the hospital has been expanded over the years with an in-built pharmacy and the cancer centre, by removing the shopping centre and the farmland. However, the main road was unaltered.

In 1960, the hospital occupied just around one-fourth of the total area, with the shopping centre, the farmland, and the car parking occupying other three quarters equally. In contrast, in 1980, the new cancer centre and the pharmacy were built along the hospital, in the place of the shopping centre. The farmland was replaced by the nursing school.

However, in 2000, the cancer centre has been expanded by restricting the nursing school and the car park to a single quarter. In contrast to 1960, the hospital combined with the pharmacy and the cancer centre occupied three-quarters rather than a single quarter in 2000.

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The response provides a good overview of the main changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the presence of a main road and inaccurately stating that the hospital combined with the pharmacy and the cancer centre occupied three-quarters in 2000.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and a logical progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with coherence and cohesion, such as the lack of clear comparisons between the different time periods and some repetition of information.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the report. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that affect the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and awkward constructions that impact the overall score.

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