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Band 7+: The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph comparing the number of books used by boys and girls at Starmouth School library from 2009 to 2012; in 2009, boys used 20 books and girls 40; in 2010, boys used 40 books and girls 80; in 2011, boys used 100 books and girls 100; in 2012, boys used 140 books and girls 80.

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The provided line graph illustrates how many library books were read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of books read by girls rose significantly over the period, unlike the number of books read by boys, which rose at the beginning and declined at the end.

Initially, in 2006, boys read slightly more books than girls, with approximately 50 and 25 books, respectively. Then, the figure for boys rose significantly, and in 2010, boys read 80 books, two times more than the 40 books read by girls.

On the other hand, in 2012, boys and girls read an equal number of books, 100 books each, and, also, the number of books read by boys was at its peak. After which, the number of books read by boys declined dramatically, while the number of books read by girls increased gradually. At the end of the period, the number of books read by girls hit its peak at around 140, meanwhile, the number of books read by boys decreased to just 80.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

books: 14

number: 8

girls: 6

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the prompt states the graph shows data from 2006 to the present, but the visual description only shows data from 2009 to 2012. Also, the report states that the number of books read by girls rose significantly over the period, unlike the number of books read by boys, which rose at the beginning and declined at the end. However, the visual description shows that the number of books read by boys rose steadily over the period. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and consistent with the visual description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, body paragraphs, and an overview. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are mostly smooth, contributing to the overall coherence. However, there are a few instances where the flow could be improved to enhance the logical connection between ideas. For example, in the second paragraph, the transition from the initial figures to the rise in books read by boys could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to guide the reader more effectively through the information.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. Terms like 'significantly,' 'approximately,' 'respectively,' 'peak,' and 'dramatically' are used effectively to describe the trends and data. However, there are opportunities to enhance the lexical resource further by incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'rose' or 'increased,' consider using synonyms like 'surged,' 'climbed,' or 'ascended' to add nuance and precision to the descriptions. Additionally, explore more precise ways to describe the quantities and changes observed in the graph. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a strong command of grammar with very few errors. The sentence structures are varied and appropriate, enhancing the clarity and readability of the report. The tense usage is accurate, and there are no noticeable punctuation errors. To further enhance the grammatical range, consider incorporating more complex sentence structures, such as using a wider variety of subordinate clauses or participial phrases, where appropriate. However, ensure that any added complexity does not compromise the clarity of the report.

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