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Band 4+: The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris parents . In your letter: Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party Explain why you won't be able to attend the party Give details of plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr. / Ms.

Hello I hope have doing well and full of feeling energy I am writing this letter to informing that I will not be able to attend in the Chris birthday I wish that he will enjoy from his birthday.

I know that the Chris friends will come for celebrating his birthday he will talk with them about his past experience and his friends are really funny they can play different games together his relatives also will bring wonderful gifts for him that will makes his birthday enjoyable.

As you aware of this matter I have a lot responsibility and recently my father passed his Mind operation and I have to be at home and take care from my father because of this issue I will not be able to attend in Chris birthday I extremely sorry for this and I hope you will not get sad I deliver my heartfelt wishes to Chris for his long life and for success in his path.

I have good news for Chris as we are really friendly with each other I can assure this that I will amends for Chirs in the end this month I will receive my salary from my office certainly I will invite you in the one of the best restaurant along with his family and we are going to record a best for Chris I hope it will be enjoyable for all.

Looking forward to a positive response from your side.

Yours sincerely,

Hadia Mohammadi

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
chris: 6
birthday: 4
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Task Response

7
The letter addresses the task requirements, explaining why Chris will enjoy the party, why you cannot attend, and a plan to see Chris later. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate language, and ensure each point is fully developed with specific details.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between paragraphs are abrupt, and the overall structure feels disjointed. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, use transition words to show cause and effect, contrast, or addition. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and overuse of simple words. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific and nuanced. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your lexical repertoire. Pay attention to collocations and use vocabulary in its correct context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Review grammar concepts and practice writing simple sentences before attempting more complex structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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