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Band 4+: The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zeland in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two pie charts comparing online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand for the years 2003 and 2013. In 2003, travel constituted 36% of sales, film/music 24%, books 21%, and clothes 19%. By 2013, the distribution shifted, with travel comprising 29% of sales, clothes increasing to 33%, books at 22%, and film/music decreasing to 16%. The data reflects changes over the decade in online sales distribution among four retail sectors.

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The pie chart illustrates the propertion of four various retail sectors in online shopping sales of New Zealand in the year 2003 and 2013.

Overall the data indicates that all sectors were as popular as each other, while the percentage of sales for travel ranked first in 2003 and film got this place in 2013.

It can be understood from first chart that people wear more eager to sales their money by going to travel, It ranked first by accounting 36%. The proportion of sales in buying books was 19% in the first year and this sector is stood at the least rank in chart in the year 2003. However it witnessed a slight increase of only 3% in the year 2013.

Two other sectors were film and clothes that they made up 21% and 24% in the year 2003 respectively. While the proportion of sales for film climbed considerably and replaced two 33%, the percentage for Clothes established a sharp Decline and accounted for only 16% in the next year.

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The main features of the data are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons between 2003 and 2013 are not consistently made.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

There are coherence and cohesion issues due to the lack of logical progression and inconsistent use of linking words. Paragraphing could be improved for better organization.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and repetitions. More precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the report.

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There are several grammatical errors, including tense inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Punctuation errors also affect the overall clarity.

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