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Band 5+: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library's manager. In your letter include: • A brief introduction of yourself • Your experience and relevant skills • Why you want the job

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Dear Manager,

My name is Balaji and I am working as a remote tester in EXL company. I had come across your job vacancy in school library which was advertised in last week’s IToday newspaper.

I have overall 3 years of experience in educational institutions as tutor. In addition, I am an expert in managerial activities and organizing events with fairly large group of students at university level. I hold master’s degree in mathematics from JNTU university in 2015. Based on the job requirements, I believe that I am great fit to the open position in your school library.

I am highly interested in this school librarian position as I prefer to work in a really quite place that offers proper work-life balance. Furthermore, the salary is attractive and well above the market standards. For your consideration, I have attached my application with all required details. Looking forward to hearing an update from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mr. Tony

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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school: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear introduction, relevant experience, and reasons for wanting the job.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences could be structured more effectively for better flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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