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Band 5+: There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

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Dear sir,

Iam writing this letter regarding reception area and receive the number of complaints by people

Iam Paramjeet and working in your oragnization and I received many complaints from other such as lack of sitting chair and provide hot water in summer season which bad impact o customer Moreover the receptionist is not able to attend to all inquiries and people have to face many difficulties.Apart from this reception area is crucial for each organisation which represents several things about the company the Bahaviour is not good of receptionist in office.

Furthermore,I want to suggest we should keep the six seated sofa along with chairs then many individual can accommodate on the chairs and sofa and feel comfortable.In addition we should keep the freezer in kitchen to cold water as wel as different type of pictures hang on the wall

I hope you will take action regarding this situation and make the right decision

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully

Param

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