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Band 6+: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear Colleagues,

I hope my letter finds you well. I am thrilled to inform you that the annual party that our company hold is next week. And like every year, I am very excited to share our ideas together ,so I am writing to suggest a gathering where we can all discuss our thoughts.

I am thinking about agreeing on a specific theme, where there will be a dress code and we will be inspired to be unusual this year. This idea is new and completely different from last year’s party when every one wore as they prefer.

Also,last year’s party was a success, but unfortunetly the food options were limited. Some of the employees didn’t eat and left early. For that reasons, I believe that it would be a great idea if we asked the staff for suggestions.

I know that we all are busy this week , so I think the best time to meet is in the lunch break where we can agree on details.

looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Doaa Abdallah

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, some aspects could be more thoroughly developed.

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The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

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4.5

While the letter attempts to use a range of grammatical structures, numerous errors affect clarity and accuracy. Improved grammar is needed for a higher score.

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