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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my sincerely gratitude for you and your staff regarding a wonderful experience and a great hospitality service I have received during my stay at your seaside hotel.

The highlight of the experience was the well- planned programme of my stay, which strating with the warm welcome by the reception desk staff who ensured that I have checked-in successfully to end by a smooth and great depature. Moreover, a variable activities I have done such as a well-organized boat trip to explore a nearby island and going scoba diving to discover the vibrant coral reefs.

According to this perfect and stunning experience in your hotel I have written a positive review of the hotel on a well-known tourists’website. I prefered to share my stay details in this website and recommend your hotel for other tourist to have similar chance to try it.

I would thank you once again and I look forward to seeing you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Yara

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

experience: 3

hotel: 3

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Task Response

8

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing thanks, specific examples, and mentioning the online review. The tone is consistently positive and the letter is well-organized. To improve, pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter generally conveys the message, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring your paragraphs more clearly around specific points, such as dedicating one paragraph to the staff, another to the activities, and a final one to the review. Transition words could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For example, instead of 'great hospitality service,' you could use 'exceptional hospitality.' Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to enhance the impact of your letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). For example, 'sincerely gratitude' should be 'sincere gratitude,' and 'strating' should be 'starting.' Proofreading carefully before submitting will help catch these errors.

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