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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear manager,

My name is Thanika. I came from Thailand last week ago and I decided to choose your hotel for living, while I am staying at Bali. I have been spending time at your hotel a few days ago. From this, I would like to inform you something.

Firstly, I am very appreciated about your hotel, including beautiful interior style, surrounded nature and lovely receptionists. In this sense, everything in your hotel which can complete my emotions such as happiness and peacefulness. Due to my personal reason is I want to avoid something that interrupts my concentration when I am alone with myself.

Finally, tomorrow I have to move to Thailand but I do not want to go back. According to capital in Thailand is very rush on everyday, I do not like environment like this and I want to stay longer. If I had opportunity for return to Bali, I will choose your accommodation first for living definitely.

Yours sincerely,

Thanika

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Overall Band Score

5.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
hotel: 4
thailand: 3
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Task Response

7
The letter adequately covers the task requirements, providing details about the stay, reasons for enjoyment, and the desire to return. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'last week ago' is redundant, and the sentence structure in the second paragraph could be more concise. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction could be more concise, and the transitions between points could be smoother. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your letter. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to...' or 'Furthermore...' to connect your reasons for enjoying the stay. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. While the words convey the general meaning, using more descriptive and specific language would enhance the letter's impact. For instance, instead of 'beautiful interior style,' you could describe specific elements of the interior design that you found appealing. Similarly, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'I came from Thailand last week ago' is redundant; it should be 'I came from Thailand last week.' Also, review the use of prepositions and ensure they are used correctly. Proofreading carefully for these types of errors will improve the overall accuracy of your writing.

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