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Band 5+: You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to reach for you about our holiday planning. We have few question according to trip.

First of all, I would like give information about our holiday time period. Our plan that we will arrive the hotel, beginning of the March. After that we will stay 4 days during the holiday. I will come with my wife and parents. So, we are 4 adults. In addition we have a baby, if you able to provide baby bed, we would happy.

If you have availability of rooms, we would like to select double rooms. As I mentioned before, we need more space.

About price, when checked on the your web site the daily cost is seems little bit expensive. Maybe it could be chance for 4 days. So,could you please provide wholly price of 4 days ?

In addtion we would like to know your hotel activities and place of historical area near the hotel. Specially for kid activities is very important for us. If you have some guidline book or something this is also help to us.

We are waiting for you feedback. After your feedback that we can decide to our final plan.

Thanks in advance,

Best Regards.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 5

holiday: 3

hotel: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses most of the tasks appropriately, providing information about the arrival and departure dates, room preferences, and inquiring about the cost, activities, and places of interest near the hotel. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not specifying the exact dates of arrival and departure, and not clearly asking about the availability of rooms for the specific dates. It would be better to provide more specific details about the arrival and departure dates and to ask for room availability for those dates.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is generally understandable, but there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. The organization of the letter could be improved for better clarity and coherence. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices and paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to enhance the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates some flexibility and control in the use of vocabulary, but there is room for improvement. There are instances of imprecise language and some awkward phrasing that affect the overall lexical resource. Using a wider range of vocabulary and refining the choice of words would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There is evidence of a range of grammatical structures, but the control and accuracy could be improved. Punctuation and grammatical errors are noticeable throughout the letter, affecting the overall grammatical range and accuracy. Paying closer attention to sentence structures and grammar would enhance the overall quality of the writing.

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