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Band 6+: You are unhappy with the gym that you recently joined. Write a letter to the gym manager. - Explain what you like about the gym. - Describe what problems you have experienced. - Suggest what the gym could do to improve.

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Dear Sir,

I have been a member of the gym for over two years and I am writing to let you know about some aspect of the gym house that I am unhappy with.

Let me explain, the issue is that the gym is small and poorly ventilated. I find difficult to exercise properly because of how tight and uncomfortable the place is. Another problem is that the equipments are old, rusty and worn out. Working out with it could be risky and unhealthy for the members. On serveral occasions, people have been injuired by the rough edge of the old dumbell.

Would you kindly relocate the gym to a more larger and well ventilated space. I would prefer somewhere quiet and comfortable. I also think that you should invest in high quality gym equipment and facilities. In addition, purchase a good sound system that will entertain the people when working out.

Thank you for your understanding. Looking forward to visible changes.

Best regards,

Chisom.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for writing, describing the problems, and suggesting improvements. However, the letter could benefit from more specific examples and a more formal tone in certain areas. For example, instead of saying 'the gym is small,' you could provide specific details about the size and how it impacts your workout. Also, the suggestion about the sound system is slightly out of place and could be more directly related to the core issues of safety and space.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and the purpose is clear. However, the organization could be improved with more distinct paragraphing to separate the different points (explaining the reason for writing, describing problems, and suggesting improvements). Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas within paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Using more precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the letter. For example, instead of just saying 'small and poorly ventilated,' you could use more descriptive terms. Also, 'gym house' is not a common phrase; 'gym' or 'gym facilities' would be more appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'some aspect of the gym house that I am unhappy with' could be rephrased for better clarity. Also, 'On serveral occasions, people have been injuired by the rough edge of the old dumbell' has a spelling error and awkward phrasing. Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure would improve the grammatical accuracy.

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