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Band 7+: You are unhappy with the gym that you recently joined. Write a letter to the gym manager. - Explain what you like about the gym. - Describe what problems you have experienced. - Suggest what the gym could do to improve.

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Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the gym i recently joined. Although i had high expectations when i signed up, my experience so far has been quite disappointing.

Firstly, many of the machines are either out of order or poorly maintained. During peak hours, it becomes extremely difficult to find available equipment, which significantly affects my workout routine. In addition, the cleanliness of the gym is below standart, particularly in the changing rooms and showers, which i find unacceptable.

As a result of these issues, i am unable to follow my fitness schedule effectively. This has not only caused frustration but has also negatively impacted my motivation and overall progress.

I would appreciate it if you could address these concers promptly. Specifically, i suggest repairing the faulty equipmant, improving hygiene standards, and possibly managing the number of members during busy hours. If these problems are not resolved, i may have to reconsider my membership.

I look forward to your prompt response and a satisfactory resolution.

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, clearly explaining the writer's dissatisfaction, the impact of the issues, and desired actions from the manager. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. Minor lapses, such as a few grammatical errors, do not significantly detract from the overall quality. To further improve, ensure consistent attention to detail in grammar and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is well-organized and the message is easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is generally effective. To further enhance coherence, consider varying your transitional phrases and ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus.

Lexical Resource

A good range of vocabulary is used, and it is generally appropriate for the context. To improve, try incorporating more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to gym facilities and fitness to demonstrate a wider lexical range. For example, instead of 'machines are out of order,' you could say 'cardio machines are frequently non-operational.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. Reviewing common grammatical errors and focusing on accuracy in punctuation will further enhance the grammatical quality of your writing.

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