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Band 7+: You have a full time job and are also taking an evening course several hours week. You feel that you can not continue taking the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter you should - Describe the situation Explain why you cannot continue Say what you intend to do

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Dear Ms. Stevens,

I am one of your students in the Biblical Anthropology course. I am writing this to inform you that I will no longer be attending our lesson, effective today, because of some personal reasons.

Currently, I am working as a full-time pre-school teacher at Little Angels Montessori Playschool. My position there is head teacher. My responsibilities in that position are getting harder because I need to attend some seminars and revise our curriculum planning for our accreditation. Sadly, my daughter who is 4 years old has a severe flu and cough. I need to take care of her medication. In that situation, I decided to stop temporarily my attendance in our evening class.

I am hoping that when we finish our accreditation and my daughter feel well soon, I will plan my schedule to attend again in your class because it is also my passion to learn about biblical anthropology and how God created man. I would love to take this opportunity to grow not just professionally but also spiritually.

Thank you for your understanding. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,

Sarvia R. Capulong

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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because: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing a clear description of the situation, reasons for discontinuing the course, and desired action. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further enhance the response, consider adding a specific request regarding future enrollment or course materials to make the desired action more explicit.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the message is clear. The progression of ideas is logical, explaining the situation, the reasons for leaving the course, and the desired action. However, the transition between the reasons (work and family) could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to better connect these points. For example, you could add a sentence like, 'In addition to my increased workload...' to link the two reasons more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. There's a good use of words related to work and personal life. To enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more varied and specific vocabulary related to the course and the reasons for leaving. For example, instead of 'some personal reasons,' you could briefly mention the specific nature of these reasons without going into excessive detail.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with mostly accurate sentence structures. There are a few minor errors that do not significantly impede understanding. To improve further, pay attention to verb tense consistency and sentence structure variety. For example, varying sentence beginnings and using a mix of simple and complex sentences can enhance the overall flow and sophistication of the writing.

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