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Band 5+: You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party you are worried that the noise disturb your neighbour write a letter to your neighbour Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mr. Himadi

This is Ramzia Hassani, your next door neighbour and I am writing this letter to invite you in my party which will hold on Monday night at 7:00 PM. I am really worried that the noise may annoy you .

I am your new come neighbour. I have decided to hold a party as I moved into my new home whcih i have been working to build this home over a year. O a, am engineer therefore I made up the map of my home moreover, I really satisfied form the constructions.

This house has a huge with scenic viewspf garden therefore, I will arrange the party in the garden. I will decorate the furniture with the white and golden color which is the color of the year. This will be a small part. I only invite my friends and relatives.

I am delighted to invite you in this party. I am sure you will not get bored as it is not for long time and your friends will also come as he is my borthers friend as well.

I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours sincerely,

Ramzia Hassani

Word Count: 193

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
party: 4
invite: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing yourself, describing the party plans, and inviting the neighbor. There are some areas where the language could be more natural and accurate. For example, rephrasing sentences for clarity and varying vocabulary would enhance the letter. Also, ensure that the tone remains consistently polite and considerate throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping related ideas together more clearly. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph solely to introducing yourself and explaining the reason for the party before moving on to the details and the invitation. Transitions between ideas could also be smoother.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of saying 'I am really worried that the noise may annoy you,' you could use phrases like 'I am concerned about the potential noise levels' or 'I hope the noise won't cause any inconvenience.' Also, avoid informal language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles (a/an/the). Proofreading carefully before submitting your writing can help catch these errors. For example, 'which will hold' should be 'which will be held', and 'new come neighbour' should be 'new neighbour'.

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