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Band 5+: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved tell about the city invite your friend to come and visit you

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Dear Darsh,

I hope you’re doing well! It’s been long we haven’t meet. I’m writing you this letter to inform you that last week I moved to Windsor.

The reason behind moving to this city was my job. As you know that for a quite long time I was looking for a job as I completed with my masters degree. Although Ottawa is very quiet & nice city, I didn’t get a entry level jobs. Then I applied through LinkedIn for various positions in different cities, however I able to secure one at Windsor.

If I talked about city, it’s a huge area.people of this city are very kind and humble. In addition to this, I can find more Indian restaurants as compare to previous city. Interesting thing is that the USA is very nearby from city so I can visit there as many as time I wanted.Apart from that many international students prefer to live in this city, because of the famous university of Windsor.

As I also come to know that from my another friend that you are also planning to visit Windsor as a part of you project. What if we make a plan and invite our other friends to stay with me at my new home. It would be great fun.

Let me know ASAP so I can start arrangements.

Waiting for your reply.

Yours truly

Kashyap

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for the move, describing the new city, and inviting the friend to visit. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, ensure consistent accuracy in grammar and word choice throughout the letter. For example, 'It's been long we haven't meet' could be improved to 'It's been a long time since we last met'. Also, proofread carefully to avoid minor errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally addresses all parts of the task, but the organization could be improved. The flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect ideas smoothly and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'city,' try incorporating synonyms or more descriptive terms. Expanding your range of vocabulary will enhance the clarity and impact of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct usage of articles and prepositions. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction will help improve accuracy.

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