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Band 5+: You have recently purchased a toy from an online shop, but the delivered product is faulty. Write a letter to the owner of the shop. In your letter . describe the toy give details of the problem . tell the owner what you want him/her to do

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DEAR SIR OR MADAM,

I HOPE THIS LETTER FINDS YOU WELL. I AM WRITING TO DESCRIBE DEMAGE TOY.LAST WEEK I HAD ORDERD FORM YOU ONLINE WEBSITE.I CHECKED IN DESCRIPTION. I SELECTED ONE ELECTRIC CAR WHICH IS MOST LIKE MY CHILED. THE ELECTRIC CAR IS SO BEAUTIFULL AND LATEST SHAPE.WHEN I ORDERD THIS CAR. MY CHILED WAS SO HAPPY.

YESTERDAY I RECEVED THE PRODUCT FROM DELEVRY COMPANY. WHEN I WAS OPEND PRODUCT AND CHECKED. SOME OF THE PARTS OF TOY DEMAGED. I DID NOT FOUNDED CAR BETTRY AND MOST IMPORTANT CAR PART VHEEL IS BROKEN.I WAS SO WORRING.MY CHILD ALSO WAS CRYING BECAUSE TOY WAS NOT WORKING.

I HAVE SEEN TERMS AND CONDITION ON YOUR COMPANY WEBSITE. IF ANY COUSTMER GETS DAMAGED PRODUCT, YOUR COMPANY POLICY IS TO REPLACE THE PRODUCT. I GIVE ADVISE PLEASE SEND NEW CAR TOY AS SOON AS POSIBLE. MY CHILD BECOME HAPPY.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION TO THIS MATTER. I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR PROMPT RESPONSE.

YOURS SINCERELY,

BILAL AMJAD.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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product: 4

company: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the toy, the problem, and the desired outcome.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is generally clear, but the flow is disrupted by numerous grammatical errors. This makes it difficult to follow the message smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a significant number of grammatical errors, affecting the overall clarity and fluency.

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Band 5+: You have recently purchased a toy from an online shop, but the delivered product is faulty. Write a letter to the owner of the shop. In your letter . describe the toy give details of the problem . tell the owner what you want him/her to do

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