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Band 5+: You have recently purchased a toy from an online shop, but the delivered product is faulty. Write a letter to the owner of the shop. In your letter . describe the toy give details of the problem . tell the owner what you want him/her to do

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Dear sir,

I recently purchased a remote control car from kids toy collection by the Amazon. I am writing this letter because the car which I ordered, that is not working. the car is in blue color and there are two lights in front side as well too at the backside of car. I also got a remote with this car which is properly working. when I start the bottom of the car all the lights are working fine but car does not move while using the remote.

I purchase this car for my younger cousin. I want to give this guy on his birthday on 20th February. so, I request to you that please change this car or you can refund the money so I can order something else.

kindly regards

Adit Mahi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

working: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the toy, the problem, and the requested solution are all present. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Some minor issues with cohesion are present.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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