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Band 4+: You recently had your car required and now it is not working properly write a letter your mechanic and in your letter Introduce yourself Explain the problem And say what you need him to do

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Dear Mr. Asrorov,

I am writing to bring to your attention a matter that requires immediate resolution my car’s problem. Last week, I went to your auto service for fix engine of my car. I believe it is important to bring your attention the following concerns regarding my lovely car.

First and foremost, Although car carries out as usual as , there is something that some issue impact to engine. Because when I switch on my car I hear loudly noise in engine system like rattling. While I checked this noise, I could not find that where is happening it. Furthermore, I never noticed before which is shaking my car. I think it is important recheck engine carefully and care all these problems. So I am going to your auto service to find solve this situation.

I hope you will address my concern as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Yusufjon Khikmatov.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

engine: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by introducing the writer, explaining the car problem, and stating what needs to be done. However, there are some issues with clarity and coherence that affect the overall task response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks coherence and cohesion due to the disorganized structure and unclear progression of ideas. There are abrupt shifts between different points, making it challenging to follow the message. Work on improving paragraphing and logical flow.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Additionally, there are grammatical errors that affect the overall lexical resource. Aim for more precise and accurate word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors throughout. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, sentence construction, and punctuation to improve grammatical accuracy.

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