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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. In your letter, Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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Dear Andrew,

I hope you are doing great over there. I am glad to tell you that I am moving to New Delhi next month as I am getting a job as a teacher in one of the well-known public school. I am writing to get some information related to the accommodation in the city.

As you have been living in Delhi for a couple of years, you must know everything about that place. I am moving alone and I do not have any relatives or friends except you. Basically, I am looking for a single bedroom apartment with reasonable price that should be closer to my work place as I do not own a car so it will be easy to up and down on daily basis.

If you can suggest me some online applications from where I can contact the owners that would be very grateful. As I heard about Delhi that it is very common to make new comers fool. I will be appreciate of you can find me a better place close to your house.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

komal.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

delhi: 3

place: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by asking for help finding accommodation, mentioning the desire to live in a single bedroom apartment close to the workplace. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details about the type of help needed and preferences for accommodation.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure of introduction, body, and conclusion. However, there are some minor issues with transitions between ideas and the flow of information. Consider using linking words to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and sophistication. Try to incorporate more diverse and advanced vocabulary to enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There is a good range of sentence structures used throughout the letter. However, there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and sentence structure would be beneficial.

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