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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. In your letter, Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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Dear Gurjeet,

I am writing a latter to move in your city as soon as possible for searching a new job. as you know my current situation very well last couple of months I lost my previous jobs going through hard financial problems. I would be very happy if you could assist me to find a friendly prices accommodation with basic facilities.

I am looking for a neat and affordable place near to bus or metro stations where I can access to easy and cheap transportation option to find an recent work.

I hope you will consider me request for searching a good place to live . Where I can star my new journey of with novel city to help my family behind in my home town

Hopefully you will find some ways to assist me .

Your faithfully

jagdeep

Word Count: 140

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more specific in its requests for help. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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