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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. In your letter, Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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Dear Mr. Shaikh,

I’m your old neighbour Ms. Dhwani Bhatt. How are you! I hope your health is better now. I’m writing this letter to a found of me for a new home in your city.

I would move to a new city for work. I give best opportunity to my company manager Mr. Smaith to give an assistant physiotherapist as a work in Surat. So I’ll move to your city I have low cost funding house and has a 1 bedroom 1 hall and 1 kitchen in there home, and near by varachha road because my work job situated in varachha road, Surat City.

So, I request with you help me in my profession. I would this type of house u can found and also residential family having in residency. That found near by varachha therefore my working place I could transportation very easy and in short time of periods.

I hope favour with me.

Your faithfully,

Dhwani.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

found: 3

varachha: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in some areas. More detail and organization would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. Using more sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Significant improvement in grammar is needed.

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