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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. In your letter, Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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Dear Smith,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and i am writing this to inform you with great news that i am moving to your city.Finally we would have a chance to spend precious time together.

Actually, i got a job in Toronto, i am moving from 1st of October as my first day of the new job will be second week of this month. Additionally, i need your assistance for the accommodation as your are being there since along time , so definitely you have ample of knowledge for suitable living place. Personally i would prefer to live near the lake area as it would be convenient for work.

Nevertheless, i would like to live in a single bed room apartment rather than in sharing with someone, where all the features likely equipped kitchen, personal bathroom should be available .

looking forward to hearing from you soon .

sincerely,

Ekam

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear information about the move, the need for accommodation assistance, and the desired location and type of accommodation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but the flow could be smoother with more cohesive transitions between paragraphs and ideas.

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The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

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Band 5+: You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. In your letter, Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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