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Band 4+: You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part-time. Write a letter to your boss.

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Dear sir,

I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing this letter to make a request to lessen my scheduled hours of work, as I need some time to study one of the important course.

As you might already aware that, I have enrolled myself for the time management 3 weeks course, I am finding myself extremely difficult everyday to complete my assignements, which results I am always worried and less productive for both study and office targets.

I really want to be entirely dedicated for my each task as my classes operates in early morning time, It would be really appreciable if I could get early finish at 4p.m. instead 9p.m in night, thus I will be able to sleep properly and do my home work.

Based on the tittle of course time management, it will ultimately help me to maintain my all planned work modules more efficiently and progressively in our department as we always face challenges for the implementations of project on time.

I believe you would consider my request and co-operate with me.

Best Regards,

Priyanka

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reason for the request and suggesting a solution. However, elaborating further on the benefits to the company and providing more specific details about how the reduced hours will be managed could strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between your reasons for needing reduced hours and the benefits to the company. Paragraphing is present, but could be used more effectively to separate distinct points. For example, the explanation of the course and its benefits could form a separate, stronger paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'lessen my scheduled hours of work,' you could use 'request a reduction in my working hours.' Also, try to avoid overly simplistic phrasing; aim for more sophisticated word choices where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar and sentence structure need significant improvement. There are noticeable errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences and using a wider range of sentence structures. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'results I am always worried' should be rephrased for better grammatical accuracy.

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