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Band 4+: Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Rahim,

I hope you’re doing well, and I Just writing to tell you that I can’t join

you to watch a movie.

This weet I’ve Group Presentation that’s necessary to complete. If, I’ll not complete the presentation. So, I definitely lose marks. But, we’ll go somewhere else in the next week because next week is a reading week. So, I’ll be free at that time.

My friend sam will join you. He’s my childhood friend and I know him very well.

You’ll enjoy his company because he’s nice and extrovert person. He also likes to watch movies and makes new friends. You’ll feel comfortable with him. I’ll inform him about this movie plan.

Hobe to see you soon,

Harmanvir Singh

Word Count: 121

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The task is mostly addressed, but the explanation of why you cannot go could be clearer and more concise. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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