24 Hours Only: Get 39% OFF on Our Premium Plan - Check Out Now!
Cause And Solution

Band 7+: In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

We live in arguably the most advanced era in recorded human history. The general level of safety and medicine have never been better. Economic conditions appear to be improving as well, but it has been noted that young people are not as happy as they used to be in previous centuries. This paradox can be explained by the more intensive competition among young people and the information overload they have to deal with regularly. As for solutions, I can suggest bans related to the use of technology, the latter being a source of unprecedented levels of information.

Money, health and safety can help one be satisfied but not always guarantee happiness, especially now in our overpopulated world of the 21st century where almost every realm seems to witness intensive competition. In other words, people’s likelihood of achieving success and being recognized is lower, a factor that partly explains why they may feel more stressed. To explain this point better, we can use current university admissions as an example. Due to an increasing number of students, the standards in higher education have been rising, and a required academic score from 20-25 years ago may not be impressive or sufficient these days. Some hardworking students may not fulfil their academic goals and be overshadowed by more talented students, both locally and globally. Maslow’s Pyramid can also help explain this phenomenon. As this famed theory explains, after having basic needs fulfilled and achieving a certain level of comfort, people need recognition to be happy, and that is what young people are struggling to accomplish these days.

Another and more important reason for young people’s discontent is related to the proliferation of technology, which presents people with much information to digest on a daily basis. As a 27-year-old who used technology for a bigger part of my life, I know exactly what it feels like to continuously suffer from this new phenomenon we call ‘information overload’. The worst part is the youth often consumes content that has a negative impact on their mental health. Instagram, for example, has been an infamous source of mental health struggles because young individuals using it often compare their own lives with those that seem to be richer, more popular and more respected. This way, they often hurt their self-esteem and feel insecure.

Although some elements of the presented development appear inevitable, some level of unhappiness among the youth can be addressed through effective prohibitions of technology use. In schools and some public places, for instance, teenagers and young adults could be totally banned from using their devices, especially for social media. This way, at least for a few hours daily, they could lead a healthier life where they do not pay too much attention to all notifications and messages they would otherwise have to process.

In conclusion, it is clear that young people are not as happy as one may expect because of the elevated level of stress that comes with fierce competition and information overload. While there may not be a way to deal with this increased competition, measures in terms of reducing technology use can help to make young individuals feel better mentally.

Word Count: 527

Essays On The Same Topic:

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What causes? What can be done to address this situation?

In recent times, some parts of the globe, young individuals have become wealthy, and may be healthier with longer lifetime, as well as they tend to become more happiness. A combination of pressure of wealth and lack of parental support can be the root causes of this phenomenon, but these issues can be effectively addressed […]

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What causes? What can be done to address this situation?

In some parts of the world, it is indeed becoming increasingly common for the young to become not only affluent but also healthier, enabling them to have longer periods of life span, but they are less likely to possess happiness. While there are certain reasons leading them to these factors, including wealth pressure, I believe […]

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What causes? What can be done to address this situation?

In some part of the world, although young people are richer, safer and healthier, they are less satisfied. The main reasons are having less leisure time and suffering from mental illness. Moreover, this essay will discuss the ways to solve these problems. Although young generation are richer, safer and healthier, they do not feel as […]

In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What causes? What can be done to address this situation?

It is true that, particularly in developed countries, the youth of today enjoy longer lives and better health, but are not necessarily happier, despite all the material possessions that they have. I would argue that there is one principal reason why they are not happier, and some steps should be taken to deal with this […]

See All

Other Topics:

Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible sollutions can you suggest?

In recent years, the issue of criminals committing further crimes shortly after being released from prison has become increasingly concerning. Firstly, this essay will examine the primary causes of this problem and, secondly, suggest effective solutions to alleviate recidivism. One primary cause of reoffending is the lack of education and vocational skills among released prisoners. […]

Write about the following topic: 'Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.' Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate regarding the appropriate way to raise children and the extent to which parents should influence their behaviour and development. While some people argue that children should be granted greater autonomy to make their own decisions, others maintain that strong parental guidance is essential. In my opinion, […]

Task 2: Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that authorities ought to work on preventing various sicknesses by reducing pollution in our environment. This essay strongly agrees with the statement because it means people will have access to fresh air and clean water, which will improve their overall health. The first main reason why the government should reduce pollution is […]

Technological advancements have led to increased automation in various industries. Some believe this will ultimately lead to widespread unemployment and societal disruption, while others argue it will create new opportunities and improve our quality of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that the boost in consumption of enhanced technologies, such as artifical intelligence may lead to worldwide unemployment, caused by machines, while others believe that this situation will end positively, like intorducing new kind of demanding work and expand the better environment. This essay will examine both perspectives, before introducing my opinion. […]

_To what extent do you agree that gender equality in the workplace has been achieved in the 21st century?_

Many people are convinced that gender equality in the workplace was achieved a long time ago, while others think that It has ensured in the 21st century. However, I believe that It has achieved recently because women get well-paid and equal hostility. I will discuss my views. Gender equality in the workplace is essential for […]

Nowadays famous people are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. Some people say this is a good thing because the public are interested in their lives. Other people think that photographers are wrong to follow famous people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s society, celebrities are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. Some people think this is a good thing because the people are interested in their lives. Other people think that photographers are wrong to follow famous people. Following famous people by professional photographers separated people to two groups who say this is a […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible and free for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
1000+ IELTS Tests & Samples
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & Content
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
279,000₫ 157,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 5,233₫/ngày)
819,000₫ 397,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 4,411₫/ngày)
1,649,000₫ 667,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 3,706₫/ngày)
3,299,000₫ 857,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 2,381₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.