🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Advantage And Disadvantage

Band 5+: In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

It is true the in some cultures young people are often told to try hard enough so that they can achieve anything. While working hard is good way to be successful, in my opinion, it also have some disadvantages.

On the one hand, there are several advantages when young people try hard enought in their lives. When students study hard at school, they will be able to outdo other classmates in the school. These students usually can get a high score in the final exam, and it can therefore give them chances to be admitted by good colleges. When these young people try hard at colleagues, they can perform well, and it is very good for their CVs that is very important to find a good job. While they work at a company, they will still work hard to finish the work assigned by their leaders, and have a better performance than other colleagues.

On the other hand, trying hard also have some disadvantages that we need to consider. When young people continue trying hard in school or in their work, they tend to do anything by themselves without getting help from their classmates, teachers or colleagues. This behavior might make them spend more time to finish a task compared with asking help from others. While people always try hard in their things, they will have less time to think about whether the methods that they try are right. If people do something in a wrong way, even they try very hard, they will not get the good result.

In conclusion, I believe trying hard enough is a good habit for young people to achieve their goals, but it seems to me that it also have some disadvantages that should to know.

Word Count: 292

Essays On The Same Topic:

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Raising children has never received more attention than in the modern world. Numerous scientific advancements over the last century have enhanced our understanding of how children learn, acquire skills, and, most importantly, apply what they’ve learned. However, many cultures still hold onto age-old beliefs that remain relevant today. One such belief is the idea that […]

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that children have been instructed that they can achieve anything if they do hard work. The primary benefit of instruction behind this is to motivate the children to achieve their goals and the concerning drawback is expecting results without effort. In many places, they have maintained a culture of motivating all students […]

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, Children are raised if they try hard, then they can achieve anything they want. There are some drawbacks associated with children’s hard work. I believe that the advantages play a very crucial role in the achievements of children. Here are the positives and negatives of this approach. On the one hand, the disadvantage is […]

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s competitive world, the approach and attitude that a child fosters is a crucial point of upbringing, hence, in some cultures children have been told that with hard work they can fulfill any goal. in this essay, I will explore both the advantages and disadvantages of this attitude and provide an opinion. In many […]

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some cultures, parents often told children that they can achieve anything if thay try hard enough. There are some advantages and disadvantages and I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. First, they will try harder in every categories. Second, they will get good grades because they study more. Third, your neighbour will admir you […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some believe that tackling environmental issues should be managed by a global organization instead of being handled individually by national governments. Do you agree or disagree with this belief?

It is common to see that, environmental issue is a major problem and it is important to be discussed in today’s fast paced world. Some people believe that, this can be managed by global organization while others think that, government has power to resist the issue. However, there are strong arguements win favour of government […]

Today, many young people enjoy shopping more than any other activity. Why do so many young people enjoy shopping? How might this trend affect people and society in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, numerous youngsters are keen on engaging in shopping retail more than any other leisure pursuits. From my perspective, there are a few reasons for that, including social media marketing, entertainment and social activity. Furthermore, due to their excessive shopping, although businesses and workplaces are supported by them, young people may become […]

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. While some people believe that this trend benefits the economy and society, others argue that governments should impose a maximum wage limit. Although extremely high incomes can encourage innovation and hard work, I believe governments should not restrict salaries directly. Instead, they should reduce inequality through fair taxation and social policies.

A small percentage of people in the world receive extremely high salaries. Although some people think it makes their country a better place by what they invest a lot of money for government or economic. However this stimulates people’s discontent, they believe that many people should not earn so much. On the one hand, high […]

Many people believe that governments should ban fast food because of its negative effects on public health. Do you agree or disagree?

“In modern era, where there are plenty of fast food restaurants operating in market. There is an ongoing debate between healthcare experts that how they can improve public’s health. It is widely believed that restricting junk food is the solution. However I do not completely agree with this perspective. I strongly believe that banning junk […]

Some people think that universities should focus on providing graduates with practical skills for the workplace, while others believe that the main function of universities is to give access to theoretical knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate surrounding the primary purpose of universities has elicited diverse opinions; some advocate for an educational model that equips graduates with essential knowledge and skills for the workforce, whereas others contend that the fundamental role of higher education is to impart knowledge for its intrinsic value, irrespective of its direct applicability in employment. In […]

Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

“The advancements in healthcare systems allow humans to be fit and live longer than ever. There are numerous advantages as well as disadvantages of this view. I would discuss merits and demerits of this perspective in upcoming paragraphs.” “To begin with, there are ample reasons why ageing people are beneficial to the society. Firstly, old […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.