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Band 7+: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged . Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is always an argument about the environmental conditions best for children’s development. Some people admire the sense of competition among youngsters, while others believe that teaching cooperation is more beneficial. In my opinion, both views have their distinct importance in children’s development. This essay will discuss both sides and provide my opinion.

On one hand, the sense of competition plays a crucial role in a young person’s life. For example, the ability to compete can forge a strong mindset and character, leading children to become ambitious, confident, and more open to exploring new facets of themselves. Competition pushes youngsters to strive for self-improvement, encouraging them to showcase their abilities and enhance every skill they possess. This hard work invariably makes children stronger.

On the other hand, cooperation and teamwork skills are also crucial for a child. The capability to cooperate and interact with others improves a child’s communication skills, which helps them build successful relationships in the future. Moreover, teamwork is beneficial in bringing youngsters closer to each other. As a result, children become kinder and more helpful to their peers.

In my opinion, both a sense of competition and teamwork skills need to be integral parts of youngsters’ lives. These abilities enhance children in two distinct ways: by fostering competitive strength, they become self-reliant; and by providing conditions where they can cooperate with their peers, we teach them kindness and the value of building strong relationships with others.

In conclusion, both skills have their distinct importance in children’s development. The capacity for competition is beneficial in terms of making youngsters stronger and more self-reliant. Meanwhile, teamwork skills help children communicate effectively with others, providing them the opportunity to forge meaningful relationships.

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