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Band 7+: Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged in children. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful alduts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people believe encouraging the young generation to develop their competitiveness is crucial. Others believe that this will be useful for their future, some argue that cooperation is more beneficial to be taught to children. While this difference has meant positive as well as some undesirable changes in school settings. I am view of that the former far outweighs the latter.

On the one hand, proponents of fostering competition argue that it equips children with essential life skills such as resilience and perseverance. In competitive environments, children learn to face challenges and cope with failure, which helps build mental toughness. For instance, when a child does not perform well in a competition, they learn valuable coping mechanisms, such as dealing with disappointment and managing their emotions. Studies in sports psychology have shown that competitiveness can teach athletes how to handle pressure and overcome adversity in a positive way, which can be applied to other areas of life.

On the other hand, many believe that teaching children to cooperate leads to more constructive and harmonious outcomes in both their personal and professional lives. Cooperative learning fosters collaboration, communication, and teamwork—skills that are increasingly important in today’s interconnected world. In primary education, for example, classrooms that emphasize cooperative learning see students actively engage with each other, share ideas, and work towards common goals. This not only enhances their academic achievements but also teaches them how to work effectively in groups, a skill that is invaluable in adulthood. Furthermore, cooperative environments tend to promote empathy and understanding, which can lead to better interpersonal relationships.

In conclusion, while competition can help children develop resilience and coping strategies, I believe that the ability to cooperate is ultimately more beneficial in the long run. In a world where teamwork and collaboration are becoming more essential, teaching children to work together prepares them to become more effective and adaptable adults.

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