🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 5+: Subjects such as Art, Sport, and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from the school curriculum?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

There have been many changes to the school syllabus that have caused divided opinions and confliction. The latest modification to the school curriculum demands subjects as art sports and music to be dropped for subjects such as information technology bare no exception. To begin with,it is undeniable that in today’s digital day and age, children should definitely be taught about information technology. Firstly,learning about information technology can be very useful for future job opportunities as it is required in various fields of work. The main cause of that is that many businesses increasingly rely heavily on technology thus making information technology skills essential in today’s jobmarket. Moreover, not only does information technology helps children develop critical thinking , but also makes them better at problem solving.That is to say, information technology often requires troubleshooting skills and considering many solutions for the best outcome.

However, in my opinion, sports,,music and art is the backbone of society. Firstly, these activities not only can bring children together and really allow them to express themselves but also form strong connections with one another as well as a sense of belonging. This means that it will be easier for the children to form strong friendships and really build a sense of community around them. Also, it goes without saying that the formative years of children can be very challenging and it is crucial that we encourage them to navigate all of their very complicated feelings and thoughts in a productive way. For instance,engaging in sports can be a great outlet for stress relief and taking care of their mental health.

In conclusion, to quote the iconic movie the dead poets society: “medicine,law, business, engineering,these are noble persuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty,romance, love those are what we stay alive for. It is my heartfelt belief that even though information technology is important as a subject ,sports, music and art should never be marginalized in the education of children as they are vital to their development as individuals.

Word Count: 335

Essays On The Same Topic:

Subjects such as Art, Sport, and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from the school curriculum?

These days, many opine that subjects like art, sports, and music should be replaced with more technology-related subjects. I disagree with this opinion as I believe that while it is important for students to be proficient in technology, it should not come at the expense of the arts and sports. To begin with, arts and […]

Subjects such as Art, Sport, and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from the school curriculum?

The modern educational system always strives for excellence, a need which has led to changes often described as controversial. A recent one regards the replacement of Arts, P.E and Music with subjects concentrated on technology. Personally, I find myself opposed to such decisions. Since the breakout of the Industrial Revolution the world has faced radical […]

Subjects such as Art, Sport, and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from the school curriculum?

A growing number of subjects are being released from education system such as Art, Sport, and Music, and replaced by new fields like Computer Science. A significant number of students are suffering from this tendency, however, I firmly agree with this point of view. An illustration of my opinion will be provided in this essay. […]

Subjects such as Art, Sport, and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from the school curriculum?

Throughout the years, there have been many changes to the school syllabus that have caused divided opinions and confliction. The latest modification to the school curriculum that demands subjects as Art, Sports and Music to be dropped for subject such as information technology bares no exception. To begin with, it is undeniable that in today’s […]

See All

Other Topics:

In the future, artificial intelligence will replace most human jobs. This will lead to a better society for everyone." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that Artificial Intelligence (AI) will take over many jobs, leading to significant unemployment. While I acknowledge that AI can have negative effects on the job market – such as a decrease in the number of employees in certain fields – I strongly oppose the notion that AI will replace most human […]

In many countries, more young people are experiencing mental health problems such as anxiety, depression and stress What are the causes? What can be done to solve the problem

Nowadays, more teenagers are experiencing mental health problems such as anxiety, depression and stress. Reason driving this trend include difficulties in studying and also problems with individuals’ family like parents sometimes compare their child with others. However, there are effective solutions that can help reduce these feelings. One of the main reasons why young adults […]

children spending too much time using devices. problems relating to this? solutions?

In recent years, it has been observed that teenager child spend more time on digital devices such as mobile phones or tablets. This issue has become a major concern for many societies. This essay will discuss main problems associated with this situation and suggest possible solutions to address them. To begin with, there are numerous […]

Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, the amount of time that children spend staring at the screen has increased at an alarming rate. Many individuals argue that this phenomenon may bring some damaging effects on children’s mental well-being. In my opinion, I partly agree with this argument because exposure to inappropriate content can cause many serious […]

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe government should spend money 💰 on building train 🚊 and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

It is believed by some that allocating funds to expanding train and subway systems will address the congestion issue, while others consider that adding new lanes will tackle this problem. This essay makes comparisons of both and chooses the most preferred option. My first point is that if public transportation is being developed, it will […]

more and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. is this attitude to wear clothes a positive development or negative?

Nowadays, there is a tendency in which more and more people who want to wear more beautiful way, so, they think that they should wear fashionable clothes. In the essay will be talked about negative and positive side of it and there will be given my own opinion. First of all, we shall talk about […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.