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Band 8+: There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a growing belief that in order for children to excel academically, certain subjects should be excluded from their school curriculum, allowing them to focus solely on academic studies. However, while it is acknowledged that young people are indeed facing significant pressure, I strongly disagree with the notion that this proposal would be beneficial for them.

The prevailing pressure on today’s youth primarily stems from their parents’ desires to see them achieve the success that they either yearned for themselves or to steer them toward similar professional paths. Consequently, many parents inadvertently compel their children to concentrate solely on academic pursuits, discouraging any potential diversions. For example, some adults who did not have the opportunity to pursue education in their youth, place a strong emphasis on their children achieving this opportunity.

Conversely, the elimination of non-academic subjects such as physical education, cookery, and photography is unlikely to enhance young people’s concentration. On the contrary, it may lead to an adverse effect, increasing the pressure on children and subsequently causing them to lose focus on academic work and motivation to study. These non-academic subjects offer a reprieve, allowing students to momentarily disconnect from academic stress. Engaging in these activities provides a mental break from academic pressures, ultimately enabling them to return to their studies with a refreshed mindset and heightened motivation.

In conclusion, while it is evident that young people are currently experiencing substantial academic pressure, the removal of non-academic subjects is likely to have an unfavorable impact on their academic performance.

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