🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Discussion

Band 7+: WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

Competitiveness creates a fierce environment anywhere, so it is only normal for it to be generated between kids, as it is a primal instinct to humans. This launched a debate between parents all over the world; some people encourage their children to be competitive, but others are afraid of the negative impacts it has on kids. Prospectively, I believe that as long as it stays healthy and does not turn into hatred and generate anger between kids, it is better to spark some heat between children to encourage them to be the best versions of themselves as they grow up.

Encouraging competitiveness can lead to stellar results; kids are continuously trying to one-up their friends, becoming top of their school year. Kids can be unexpected and surprising, as they might figure out and discover their talents if they tried to. Competitiveness can increase the children’s desire to work harder, hoping to reach the top of the mountain, and learn from a young age that hard work will pay off with greater results.

Although all of this sounds great, competitiveness can enroll a lot of pressure on an adult, so imagining this heavy burden on a child, it can reach extreme measures. Children are always trying to show off their skills to others, so when put in a competitive environment, it can be hardcore. Reaching the top might be extremely hard, and that can become a reason for children to feel weak in the presence of their parents; the results of this can be a child becoming depressed. Competitiveness can initiate fights between kids; due to their young age, they might not be able to comprehend the definition of being competitive.

Overall, the advantages can be very desirable, but it might come at the cost of the child’s mental health.

Word Count: 299

Essays On The Same Topic:

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

There is an ongoing debate regarding how competitive school environment can have an impact on children. While some believe that it can affect students negatively, others argue that it creates high-achieving individuals. Personally, I agree with the notion that competitiveness in educational settings can be beneficial to students, as it encourages them to constantly learn […]

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

In my point of view, nowadays the schools are acting too competitive for the children and this high competition is creating negative impacts upon them rather than supporting their mental & physical health to grow smoothly. Below, I will show some reasons behind of this point of view for further clarification. Firstly, Children have a […]

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

competitivness creates a fierce enviroment anywhere, so it is only normal to be generated between kids as it is primal instinct to humans. This launched a debate between parents all over the world, some people encourages their children to be competitve, but others are afraid of the negative impacts it has on kids. Prospectively, I […]

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

Competitions plays an essential part in the growth of society, however it may add unwanted stress to the lives of the individuals who are to lead the country in the future, I believe that competition should be kept to a minimum in a studying environment as it may lead to unnecessary stress. On one hand, […]

See All

Other Topics:

People believe that the quality of life today is better than in previous generations. Others argue that modern life brings more stress and lower well-being. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals argue that modern life has made people more stressful, while others believe that it provided people with better quality of life. This essay will discuss both views. On the one hand, modern life has completely changed people’s perception of the world. Most of the time people spend a lot of time using their […]

In some countries,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people reach this?

In some nations, will to research the background of the building or the houses they are living in amongst society is increasing. People want to discover and know if their living space holds any historical significance or has any structural defects. Individuals can find such information in historical writings or painting, where their own building […]

In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem.

Nowadays many people do not participate in recycling process to reproduce used materials such as glass, paper, and metal items. This essay will discuss reasons and give solutions to encourage people. One of the main reasons why citizens do not recycle commodities is that lack of knowledge about its benefits for the environment. This can […]

Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

In our contemporary world many people have oppotunity to use wireless Internet for different purpose, espessially for communication thanks to specific servesies. From my perspective, the advantages of using social media actually outweight the disadvantages and I can explain why. ‎One of the most essential advantage of chatting in social media is independence of geolocation. […]

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals and plants because humanity has more important problems to solve. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A number of people believe that there is no room for spending money on the protection of wild animals and plants, however, humans have more essential problems to deal with. I completely agree with this idea. On the one hand, population keeps increasing, which means that the value of accomodation is getting more essential. People […]

In many countries, the proportion of older people in the population is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend for society?

Nowadays, the number of older people has been recorded to increase in many countries. This phenomenon is a disadvantageous development because while older people can provide valuable experience, an increase in the old can hamper economic growth. This essay will explain in detail why the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, the increase […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Buy activation codes in bulk and give one to each learner. A code does not expire until it is used, and each subscription only starts counting once its code is entered, so you can buy now and hand them out later.

10+ codes: 10% off 25+ codes: 15% off 50+ codes: 20% off
The codes are emailed to your payment address as soon as the payment goes through, and are also shown on the confirmation page. A tax invoice is issued automatically at checkout — select Purchasing as a business there to put your organization's name and tax ID on it.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.