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Band 6+: The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007.

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The image shows percentages of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation: 2001: English 70%, French 75%; 2002: English 40%, French 70%; 2003: English 35%, French 65%; 2004: English 30%, French 70%; 2005: English 30%, French 65%; 2006: English 32%, French 75%; 2007: English 25%, French 70%.

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The line graph compares the proportion of first-year teachers who taught English or French from 2001 to 2007.

Overall, French instructors increased over the period, whereas a decline was witnessed in the figure of English teachers.

With regard to French instructors, their proportion was roughly 70% in 2001. However, it dropped significantly to 50% in 2002. After that, there was a gradual increase in teachers of French from 2003 onwards, reaching a peak at approximately 75% in 2007.

The proportion of teachers of English was nearly equal to French in 2001, with approximately 75%. Compared to French instructors, there was the same decrease from 2001 to 2003, which was the fall of roughly 30%. English instrucotrs were increasingly less common over the course of the last 4 years of the duration.

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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french: 6

english: 4

proportion: 3

teachers: 3

instructors: 3

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6.5

The report accurately addresses the task by comparing the trends of English and French teachers. Minor inaccuracies in data presentation do not detract significantly from the overall response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is well-organized and easy to follow. Paragraphing is logical, and the overall flow is smooth. Minor improvements in the linking of ideas could enhance the cohesion.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the task. While mostly accurate, some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated for a higher band score.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors that prevent a higher score. Improving grammatical accuracy and range would significantly enhance the report.

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