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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 2 50 words.

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There are some views think that because schools have a competitive environment, it could effect on children in negative way . On another hand, there is some parents believe that ,if their children was in somewhere that have a competitive between students they could achieve higher marks . In my perspective, I believe every view have her advantage and disadvantages side , but im most likely to believe competitive environment encourages children to be successful for different reasons. Such as , if they see other student achieve a good marks that maybe would give them the motive to be better in next time . Oversized, being in competitive environment since young age will help them later in their careers.

First of all, schools are usually a place that stufents being compared from themselves or teachers. In addition, if they see their collegial doing great and being awarded for their work , the other students will get the motive and try to improve themselves to be in the exact place in next time . So that will make them more successful and achieve a great achievement.

Secondly,Most people think that competitive environment the kids go through it in school only .The opposite happened they will experience that in every stage in their live specially in works . So normalize how to act in situations like that . Likewise, it will shape their personalities and make them more confident and able to face different situations.

In conclusion, people need an encourage sometimes to get their tasks done .And that motive come when we see people achieve things that we want to ac

hieve.

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