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Band 4+: The graph below shows the per capita consumption of butter and margarine in the United States between 1980 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Task chart

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The image displays a graph of per capita butter and margarine consumption in the U.S. from 1980 to 2020, showing 1980: butter at 4 lbs, margarine at 10 lbs; 1990: butter at 4 lbs, margarine at 8 lbs; 2000: butter at 5 lbs, margarine at 5 lbs; 2010: butter at 6 lbs, margarine at 3 lbs; 2020: butter at 7 lbs, margarine at 1 lb.

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The graph demonstrate the intake of 2 different oils in the United States from 1980 to 2020.

Overall,margarine was well known among Americans in the beginning of the given period despite this it experienced a constante decline. While the

usage of the butter was less popular rather than margarine in the begenning, nevertheless it became a front runner by 2020.

In 1980, the consumption of the margarine was in its peak around 10.5 Ibs, however it saw a dramatical decline and reached just 2 Ibs by 2020.

While the use up of the butter was half ibs of the margarine which was approximately 5 Ibs, and experienced a swell and reached 6 by the end of the given period.

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The report identifies some key trends but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. To improve, provide more specific data points and ensure accuracy in reporting the values. Also, the last paragraph is not very clear and contains some grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct ideas or time periods. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('use up') and imprecise language ('swell'). Expand your vocabulary related to trends and data description to provide a more nuanced and accurate account of the graph.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('demonstrate' instead of 'demonstrates'), subject-verb agreement issues ('margarine was well known'), and incorrect word forms ('constante' instead of 'constant'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules and sentence construction.

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