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Band 5+: You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Dear Juhi,

Hello. I hope this letter finds you well. This is to actually apologize as by mistake I carried your I-pad with me.

Thank you so much for a wonderful weekend. I really enjoyed those two days I spent in your house spending quality time with you. As you know, I live in a large city where I don?t have many close friends like you hence, I really needed a short break like this and needless to say you are an amazing host.

The reason I mistook your I-pad is mine is the same as yours so while packing in a hurry I accidently put your device in my bag. I realized my mistake only when I switched on the device after reaching home.

But don?t worry. I am sending it back to you this afternoon by a postal service which delivers such objects and you will be receiving it by tomorrow noon. The receipt number that you will need to provide is A888.

Once again, I am really sorry for the inconvenience. Hope to see you soon.

Best regards,

Veni.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

really: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining how the mistake of carrying the friend's iPad happened and how the sender plans to return it. However, more details about the enjoyable stay with the friend could have been included to enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition from discussing the enjoyable stay to the explanation of the mistake. Consider smoother transitions between ideas for improved cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive ('mistake' is used multiple times). Try to vary your word choice more to demonstrate a wider lexical resource. Additionally, some sentences could be phrased more naturally for a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation would be beneficial.

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Band 5+: You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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