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Band 7+: A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: apologise for it explain what you are doing on that date suggest to him/her an alternate time to come

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Dear Sasha,

I got your message that stated your visit to my city. Let me tell you, I am more than excited and elated to receive you. However, I’d like to apologize beforehand for what I am going to say next. The date that you mentioned – 25th February, unfortunately, I am not available on this date.

I have my last exam; thus, I would have to go out of the city for the entire day. If it was not that important, I wouldn’t be asking you not to come. In fact, for months, I was waiting eagerly to meet you.

Why don’t you change the date if possible? I am free anytime after 25th February. You will be more than welcome to stay with me for as many days as you want. We are definitely going to have a fun-filled time together.

Once again, I am sorry for this inconvenience. Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours lovingly,

Aastha

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7.5

The letter appropriately addresses the task by apologizing for not being available on the suggested date, explaining the reason, and suggesting an alternate time for the visit. However, it could have been more specific about proposing a particular alternate date.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is clear and easy to follow. The letter is well-organized with a proper introduction, explanation, and suggestion. The coherence and cohesion are maintained throughout. Consider using more transition words to enhance the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used appropriately. However, try to incorporate more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to further enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, consider using more formal language in certain parts of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately. There are minor punctuation errors that can be improved, such as missing commas in some places. Pay attention to maintaining consistent punctuation throughout the letter.

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