Band 5+: The bar chart below shows a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20—30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart depicts people who succeeded between the ages of 20 and 30 dividing factors which inspired them into eleven groups.

Overall, the most factors which inspired them were personal satisfaction and ambition. However, the least contributed factor was fear of failure.

In detail, roughly 25% of young professionals admitted fear of failing led to their success. Envy and jealousy on other peoples’ achievement motivated precisely 30% of these people. Rivalry and personal satisfaction led precisely 50% and 80% of young professionals to success, relatively. 70% of these young individuals were motivated by family pressure.

Moreover, almost 45% of young proffesionals claimed that peer pressure motivated them to reach success. Ambition of these people led precisely 80% of these individuals to success and earning money contributed almost 43% of their accomplishments. Young professionals claimed 60% of motivation which made them successful came from society pressure. Desire for material things inspired 50% of young professionals and feeling inadequate motivated about 32% of these people.