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Band 7+: The maps below show a coal mining site before and after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two maps; first labeled "Before" with office, staff changing room, parking area, director board, car parking, entrance underground (for workers), waste tip 1, and waste tip 2; second labeled "After" with museum, parking area, cafe, entrance underground (for visitors), digging driving track, picnic area, children play area, and lottery park.

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The provided plans illustrate the transformations of a coal mine after being redeveloped into a tourist attraction.

From an overall perspective, it is evident that there were many changes in the coal mine, such as demolishing many working areas and adding some new tourist facilities.

During the renovation, the office and the staff changing room in the top-left corner of the mine were merged into a museum, while the adjacent entrance underground was still there and was used for visitors. In addition, the waste tip 1 and the waste tip 2 in the left corner were removed to make room for the appearance of a digging driving track and a picnic area, respectively. Meanwhile, the director board located in the center of the coal mine was converted into a coffee store.

In the bottom-left corner of the coal mine, the parking area remained unchanged, whereas the nearby car parking was transformed into a lottery park. Additionally, a new children play site was constructed in the bottom corner.

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The report accurately addresses all parts of the task. The main features are clearly identified and compared effectively. Minor improvements in the description of changes could elevate the response.

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7.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures. However, a few grammatical errors are present, affecting the overall accuracy and fluency. Addressing these errors would significantly improve the grammatical range and accuracy.

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